Book Review: “The Breaking World: Dawn of Swords” by David Dalglish and Robert J. Duperre

Dawn of SwordsTitle: The Breaking World: Dawn of Swords
Author: David Dalglish and Robert J. Duperre
Publisher: 47 North
Publication Date: January 14, 2014
Length: 609 pages

Obtained: I bought my copy from Amazon.

The Plot: Dezrel is a new world, a young world. The gods Karak and Ashhur have come to this world to try again at creating humanity after failing before. With this new attempt at humanity the brother gods have designated some known as the First Families to guide the fledgling race as it discovers the path it should take. The leading members of these families will never age and never die as long as they remain faithful to their respective deities, If they aren’t, the aging process begins. Sometimes, they haven’t exactly remained faithful, but they go to great lengths to try to hide it from others.

The children of Karak are at odds with those they have thrown out of their order and have threatened them with destruction if they don’t forsake their ways. The children of Ashhur are content to live their lives full of innocence, ignoring the happenings in other parts of the land. Ashhur has protected them, protected their lives so they can be happy.

Jacob Eveningstar, the very first man created by the god brothers is determined to find a solution to the problem as he knows that if the children of Karak go through with their plan the entire world, both the followers of Karak and the followers of Ashhur will suffer.

The Commentary: There is an awful lot going on in this book, and if you are a fan of the Half-Orc universe, you will find Dawn of Swords to be a wonderful eye-opening look at the early days of Dezrel that are referenced so often in the other books. There is a lot of great information in Dawn of Swords that adds so much extra depth to the books that take place after it in the Half-Orcs chronology. For no other reason than that I found Dawn of Swords to be a great read. David Dalglish has previously created such a vibrant world with his books and now Robert J. Duperre has joined Dalglish to take that world to the next level.

Seeing Karak and Ashhur in person for the first time was really exciting. I had pictured in my mind how the two of them would be from the other books, but I was only partly right with my mental picture. I had their general characteristics rather spot on, but the more subtle things I was pleasantly surprised with.

Having the chance to learn about the First Families and the life of Jacob Eveningstar was also a very exciting thing for me. They are referenced plenty of times in other books but they were always a mysterious entity most of the time. There is a lot going on with the First Families and I think there is a lot more to learn in the books that follow Dawn of Swords. I believe it is intended to be the first of a trilogy, but don’t quote me on that.

The world building in Dawn of Swords is spectacular. Dalglish and Duperre have a lot of room to work with Dezrel and because this book is essentially the origin story for all the other ones they get to do a lot of filling in the blank along with bringing new information to the forefront. All of it was done with fine dexterity, and while the book may have been just a tad too long for the story it was telling, the pictures being painted were fantastic.

Needs More: Action. Dawn of Swords has its fair share of action scenes, but at over 600 pages in length I went in thinking there would be more action of the epic variety. This isn’t a knock on the book by any means, it’s just that as a personal preference, given the amount of action I’ve seen in the other books of this universe, it was a little tame. Perhaps it comes as part of this book being such a big world building endeavor.

Needs Less: Exposition. I’m all about length epic fantasy books, but this on was just a hair too long for the content it was giving me. Perhaps 75 pages less would have done the trick for me. There were a handful of scenes that hung on just a little bit too long.

Worth It? Yes, I think so. Granted, this is not the book to start with if you are looking to read something from this universe for the first time because it deals with a lot of story that won’t make as much sense as if you’ve read some of the other books first. However, if you are a fan of David Dalglish’s previous books, this new prequel to those by Dalglish and Duperre will likely  be something you’ll enjoy.

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